In writing we have been learning about descriptive writing on this google drawing I have put my six favourite sentences.
What is your favourite sentence?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 3 and my teacher is Miss Lover. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
In writing we have been learning about descriptive writing on this google drawing I have put my six favourite sentences.
What is your favourite sentence?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Mila
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed reading some of your descriptive sentences. My favourite sentence is about the monster who's belly jiggled like jelly. Have you enjoyed writing about the settings, actions or characters?
Miss Smith-Palmer
Hi Miss Smith-Palmer
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed writing about the characters the most.
Mila